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My name is Joey.

Today I killed my girlfriend. It wasn’t my fault, but it was. And I’m not sure if anyone will listen to me or care or give a damn.

I loved her and I’m not a sappy guy who says that all the time. I’m an asshole who makes bad jokes and loses friends but for some reason Kara saw past that. Fuck, she looked right into my soul and saw that a part of me was broken. She once told me that I was her torn heart, and she would fill the holes with pieces of her own. That girl spouted poetry like a fountain spouts water.

I hope they lock me up and let me rot in jail for the rest of my life. I’m a hazard to you, myself and everyone.

I’m so sorry, you have no idea how much.

Fuck, why did she let me drive?
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I think the drive thing is going to be an ongoing, never ending story, with random P.O.V.s and flashbacks and etc. It will be a shattered grief, with shattered moments, no coherency or straightforward plot. Just so you know, I'm semi-basing this on my personal experience so while Joey and Kara are parallels to me and Jason their characters are very different.

And this piece is me tasting his emotions ... I'm too afraid to dive in character yet, but expect some dark pieces from the P.O.V. of Joey.

How will Joey cope?
How would you?

The Crash:
Part 1. [link]
Part 2. [link]


And Continued .... Part 4: [link]

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:icondivinshki:
I'm terrified something like this is going to happen to me when I drive.

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Kalie + Savanna
10-25-08
Ya tyeba lylubyu

The broken will never die.
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:hug: I hope it doesn't... but be careful

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JN: ~25.09.89 - 14.01.09~ Forever in my heart

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Finally I was strong enough to read this ... and just like I expected, I can not regret it. You really touch me deep inside, do you know that?

I certainly wouldn't be able to cope (just to answer your thoughtful question). Maybe I would try to erase everything from my mind, but given this isn't possible there would only be one way in the end: A blind alley.

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Thank you, wow.

That means a lot to me..

I hope that this story and I may continue to touch you. Thank you so much for reading and supporting..

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JN: ~25.09.89 - 14.01.09~ Forever in my heart

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:icondarkemoprincess:
wow that really is amazing. It felt like you had to go somewhere deep inside yourself that you weren't willing to go to before!

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Wow, thank you :heart:

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JN: ~25.09.89 - 14.01.09~ Forever in my heart

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You are very welcome!
I enjoyed reading it!

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You're welcome, dear.
I really doubt that this story may stop moving me.

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