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Sometimes true love is a butterfly that lands in your heart for half a second
While you laugh and talk to nobodies with the unknown pulling
Tugging on broken soul strings which seem to never snap

With painful tears across the living beat of life
Almost want to take a shard of broken glass
And sever our connections between this body, soul.

If the butterfly flies away, that love was made a lie
But this one dies and rots in my open palm
Leaving a heart shaped imprint on the box that holds a soul.

Perhaps he was an angel, with his imperfect laugh and smile
Tempting our hearts to love him, loathe him
While his inner monster would fight against him

Large round eyes to entice our souls
Come sweet butterfly, and land upon my open lips
You are my lovers angel, may we always become one.
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I'm still here and dreaming of a better yesterday




The wings of a butterfly are beautiful... if angels have wings then those are they.

He is watching me...

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:iconscionoflove:
to a take a = an extra a?

Tempting our hears to love him = hearts

loothe = can u tell me what this means

but i liked your metaphors
the butterfly too :D

but i personally don't like them much.
ah well.

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:iconincubustrav421:
I love the imagery of the butterfly ... great comparative diction within the emotional ties ... great job :)

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Thank youuuu... Their was an extra "a" and my heart needed a T... and loothe was supposed to be loathe..

I dunno about the metaphors either, I had to idea a few nights ago and left the half written metaphor on my computer so I went back and finished it after the inspiration was gone.

First time I wrote it I had a vision, but I don't remember what it was supposed to be.

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Thank you very much :)

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You are most welcome :)

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yea i hate when that happens. i get this awesome idea, but when i get around to actually writing, i can only vaguely remember it.

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I'm addicted to a game i'm no good at.
take a guess at the four letter game that doesn't have any pieces but you and me.
:icontheleavesofmemory:
yup, so this is a mesh of two musings which makes it utterly unwonderful. >.<

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JN: ~25.09.89 - 14.01.09~ Forever in my heart

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oh i didn't say that.
still wonderful.

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I'm addicted to a game i'm no good at.
take a guess at the four letter game that doesn't have any pieces but you and me.
:icontheleavesofmemory:
Ha, well I think it's unwonderful :p

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JN: ~25.09.89 - 14.01.09~ Forever in my heart

Member of =RawEm0tion ~Acid-Burst-Love-Fed
Avatar by ~marchetooo


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